- We received alternative suggestions for the title of our films, one of which being 'The Takeaway Kid'. We have considered this new name or another alternative but still have found that 'Pizza Boy: A Day in the Life' is the best fitting for a mockumentary.
- It was also suggested that we add a 'twist' to the short film but as the film is a serious documentary spoof we felt that this idea would not fit well in our plot line.
'A Decade in the Making' Feedback:
- A suggestion of an alternative name we were given was '10 Years On' which could work well for the film so we will keep it in consideration.
- Another few suggestions were that we include a twist or include a villain. I think that it would be beneficial to the short film if I include both of these elements so I will keep them in consideration. These changes may be used as this feedback was relevant and a good idea.
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